Thursday 8 January 2009

thought

still on the subject of thought:
when we think with our minds
its only half the story.
thinking with our bodies
must be our aim.
peace treaties,
compromise
and maybe, one day,
real friendship!

I was going to say
'only love can heal the breach'.
why does that sound like twaddle?

the real problem with the word 'love':
to those who are 'in love'*
it makes perfect sense.
to the rest of us:
it's just a sour taste in the mouth.

*I don't think I mean to be sarcastic here.
I did wonder about removing the commas,
but found that I could not, for some reason.

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